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Improved piece reflection

           

This essay wasn’t the highest scoring essay I’ve written all year, but it does show how I’ve been able to improve my overall writing. Compared to all of my other rhetorical analysis essays this was the one that scored the overall highest. This is partly because I began to add more evidence and shorten the length of the information I provided. This essay actually expresses more analysis, which is the point, then I had done in previous rhetorical analysis works.